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I sighed as I got a new mission, the only thing I have to do is kill more homunculi and chimeras. Well good thing I get to work with my friends, Edward Elric and his brother, Alphonse Elric. When they walked in my heart skipped a beat.
  "hi Ed, hi Al~" I said running over to them.
  "hi _____!" the suit of armor happily exclaimed, "did you grow?" he said, comparing himself to you.
  "I guess…" I said, looking up at him. Alphonse laughed a little.
  "yeah, but your still taller than me." Edward mumbled.
  "awww~ don't be a buzz kill, Ed~" I happily said, when it doesn't madder sense I have always been taller than him.
  "WELL STOP GROWING!!!!!!" he yelled loudly that everyone in the HQ looked at them. You couldn't help but laugh.
  "calm down." you said, still laughing.
  "don't laugh." he said, he looked so sad.
  "ha! don't look like that." I said, walking over and hugging him. He jumped back a little before hugging me back, "are you ok?" I said in Ed's ear when he jumped back.
  "yeah, I'm just fine." he said, there is something wrong, because he never jumped back when I hugged him until now, but what is it?
Its only short cuz i dident know who would like the story :XD: i probally will continue it though :XD:
i only made this cuz i have never seen X Readers for any anime exept for hetalia :XD:

i do not own FMA
you, ownd by you... i think....
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SakuraStar10311 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015  New member Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe short but sweet, just like Ed ^///^
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Artkittycatforever Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
hey i got a question if i made a Edward X reader would u read!!! :iconfangirlzplz:
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American-Hero123 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
S-Sure? owo
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Artkittycatforever Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
yay!! ^^ me so happy!
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autumnlovesnatsu Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
she's right I think that this is a good story because it's funny but please MAKE A PART TWO!!! OR I WILL USE MY MAGIC!!!!WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO  
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American-Hero123 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
I have made a part 2 its on my story account ~long-live-Stories :3
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turtleseatinicecream Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Student General Artist
MAKE A PART TWO NOW I DEMAND IT XDRage Stare Nuu Petting is sensual!
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American-Hero123 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013
X3333 I'm trying to, I've just been procrastinating X33
It'll be on this account though :iconlong-live-stories:
ONE DAY I'LL MAKE THE NEXT PART :iconfinallyplz: X33
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turtleseatinicecream Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Student General Artist
could that one day be like today? :3
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American-Hero123 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013
I'll work on it today then ;P
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turtleseatinicecream Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Student General Artist
thank i love you! (not like that xD) Heart
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American-Hero123 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013
Yuup x333 I'll post it tomorow~~ I'm heading over to a friend's right noww~ X333
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turtleseatinicecream Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Student General Artist
haha okay :3 thankkss and have fun at your friends!!
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American-Hero123 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013
I actually posted it before I left, but it's REALLY short unu;
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karkat2297 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013

I think I know why, or am I being weird? and yes you should make 2

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American-Hero123 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
You're not being wweird~~ :P
And I wwill, one day :iconfinallyplz:
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keasterwo8902 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Student General Artist
Should make part 2
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:iconamerican-hero123:
American-Hero123 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
If I do it'll be on this accout: :iconlong-live-stories:
Sooner or later I wwill make it :3333333
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keasterwo8902 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Student General Artist
Mk
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LessThan33 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
GAMZEEEE!!!
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American-Hero123 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013
yEs~?
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Nightcry256 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ur so right about the hetalia x reader thing xD :iconbouncingplz:
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American-Hero123 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013
XDDD
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Nightcry256 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
~(>u<~)
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BlackRockShooter4242 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Your going to write more now. And when I say now, I mean.... NOW!!
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American-Hero123 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013
XDD Im trying, i just dont know what to do next XDDD
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BlackRockShooter4242 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
0^0
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American-Hero123 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
:hug:
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BlackRockShooter4242 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I LIVE YOUR ICON! Gamzee!
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American-Hero123 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013
ThAnKs (o:
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BlackRockShooter4242 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
HoNk! :o)
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American-Hero123 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013
X3333
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TwistedSirens Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
i have a idea for you maybe when he was vs a homunculi it turned into the reader and it tried to hug him and stuff
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American-Hero123 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013
o.o..... *pulls out my notebook and pencil*
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kuratha Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
Continue plea-sue
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American-Hero123 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
XD im trying but i have wrighters/drawing block XD
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kuratha Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012
Well I'm watching... hope youget over it
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American-Hero123 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012
:P thanks~ XD
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Cielsgurl555 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Please continue its really good
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American-Hero123 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
im trying but my laptop broke so now I have to use a tablet and its too complicated.... I'll continue as soon as I can~
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kittykatluvur777 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
continue it bro! its good
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Hinata-Wolf77 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012   General Artist
Good job so far hope u finish it.
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American-Hero123 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
thanks~~ :33
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nightwolf9458960 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
do more. your doing great!!!
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ElectricalAlchemist Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I
love
this.

There's no rush of course, but whenever you have the time, please do continue it. <3 Even if it's by next summer. If I must be honest I haven't found too many good EdXReader fanfictions. Most of them are either too dirty for my taste, or whoever writes them makes the reader a giggly, blushing little girl who overreacts, which just gets on my nerves...But I really like this one! It's one of the few that doesn't annoy me. :XD: Great job!
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American-Hero123 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012
XDDD thanks!! i'm trying to continue it but ideas that arnt fullmetal pop into my head DX
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ElectricalAlchemist Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah. XD Well take your time~
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LilyJump13 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Moar!!!! Pwease :iconpleaseplz:
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DarkRoseStayla1 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Make the next part Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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American-Hero123 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012
i'll try~~ ^^; if you have any ideas i'd love to hear 'em~~~ :3
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